Weekend Writing Warriors: 04/27/13 Speed Date

WEEKEND WRITING WARRIORS

Welcome back to the Weekend Writing Warriors again. I’m so enjoying seeing my old friends and finding new authors. Hope you all have a great Sunday!

Today I’m continuing from my newest WIP, Speed Date.  This snippet immediately follows yesterday’s Sweet Saturday Sample (view here).  Roberta is at a speed dating event, her first time, and in this 8, her first “date.”

Wikimania_Washington_2012_013George, a sandy blonde with greenish eyes, kept clicking a ballpoint pen as he said,  “So, have you done this before?”

“Never,” I replied, trying to smile as if that didn’t make me sound like I was finally desperate enough to try anything.  “Are you from the area?”

“No,  I transferred six months ago from Ft. Belvoir, but I’m originally from Oklahoma.”

“I was born and raised in Tidewater and I now live on the Eastern Shore.”  I was supposed to tell these men the truth, right?  What if he was a serial killer?  At least he didn’t know where on the Eastern Shore.

Hope you enjoyed Roberta’s first foray into speed dating.  But the night’s not over yet.

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20 Responses to Weekend Writing Warriors: 04/27/13 Speed Date

  1. Very vivid and true to life. At least I assume so! 🙂

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  2. Carrie-Anne says:

    I’d feel awkward on a speed date too. It seems like it’d be hard to find a real connection when you’re meeting so many guys in such a short time.

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  3. brandi says:

    I haven’t read a speed dating story before. I could feel the discomfort here. At least she didn’t give out her address!

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  4. Lindsay says:

    I could almost feel her tension about not wanting to reveal to much when she was talking.

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  5. Great dialogue. It feels real and uncomfortable which makes the scene enjoyable 🙂 (at least for readers)

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  6. Toni Kelly says:

    Jenna, am so loving this story. Ready for the next snippet!

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  7. Sue says:

    Yeah can’t wait to see where you’re going with this. And still amused you decided on first person in this story

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  8. Ha! I have to go with those who want to grab that clicking pen away. Nice detail. 🙂

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  9. I’d have to take that pen away from him! This sounds exactly like the kind of thing you’d say if you were speed dating, which for the record I don’t think I could do. There probably aren’t too many serial killers there, but lots of awkwardness for sure.

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  10. Great details. I’m with Ella, but I’d probably snatch the pen away and give him a chance to talk!

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  11. I wouldn’t be brave enough to try speed dating. I would be thinking they were all questionable. I’m not that trusting. lol

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  12. karen lopp says:

    Hey I grew up in Oklahoma:) Great eight.

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  13. Sara Barnard says:

    LOVE this Jenna!! I can totally relate with the heroine’s inside thoughts!! Always second-guessing and questioning herself. Beautifully constructed and perfectly executed 🙂

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  14. If a guy kept clicking his pen talking to me I’d leave. Wonderful snippet. Tweeted.

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  15. Loved it, especially the pen clicking detail, very telling. Can’t wait for more, terrific snippet!

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  16. Speed dating. Gives me the shivers. Good luck Roberta. Super eight. You captured the awkward moment.

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  17. Lauren Smith says:

    Ooh speed dating! That’s pretty scary! I admire her trying it out. I can’t wait to see what happens!

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  18. Daryl Devore says:

    The pace if the snippet is about the pace of a speed date. Great job.

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  19. Cara Bristol says:

    Dialog is perfect. Exactly the kind of conversation one would have — as well as the concerns.

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  20. Ooo! Love this premise! Definitely want to know who Roberta end ups picking. Great 8! 😀

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